|Title: So Far Away
The power pop comes through immediately
on this track, Tim. The vocals bark and bite and bring a clear
reading of the message tossing out emotion like breathing. The power
chords bring lots of support for the rhythm section. Any way to
bring in a musical hook that can work in conjunction (and support
of) the vocals and big lyrical hooks?
|Title: Dream About You
Another vocal assault that will demand
attention from listeners. The message that the voice wrings out is
simple and consistent. The vocals bring out the intensity hinted at
in the wording and with the power of the voice their is no question
about sentiments. A great big lyrics hook.
Rock/Pop in a Power Pop feel and tone.
|Your songs cook, Tim,
and move forward like a freight train. The vocal intensity works in
perfect tandem with the power of the instrumentation. As I mention,
for Pop categories one key ingredient is the musical hook. That can
come in the form of a simple, memorable note progression that can
exist throughout the track with persistence and subtly in one. The
power of "Dream About You" is almost physical. By bringing in a
simple, memorable musical hook that track can build on its promise
of Power Pop by the inclusion of that simple note progression.
||Well - Recorded|
||Not great, but clean enough for this listing|
||Too much distortion|
||Drums/percussion sound stiff and/or mechanical|
||Instrumentation sounds too synthetic|
Sound recording is well produced and
Listener ID # 216